how sweet! mothers are great! keep it up!

plz comment on mine too!

woo hoo go me lol i thought it was funny too lol

Aww this was so sweeet. mother are the best peopl in the world most of the timw with out mine i have no idea where i would be. you love your mom and thta shows in this poem i hope you let her read it . 5.5

Really good, rhyming was sometimes off but hey none of us are perfect right. and with some corrections i admit it could be better but when you are writing something for someone else i think that gives it a different purpose like the fact that you care so much to write a poem just for them washes over every mistake that could be changed it dosnt need to be this was really good and it was so sweet im sure your mom took this heart if you gave it her i woulda framed it lol 5!

You might want to fix this:

"I love you mom,
Every seconed I breath,
The memories of you,
Far more then skin deep"

But other than that , this poem is flowless , loved it !5/5

Very well written 5/5 very good one