no i think it's a great poem, it's really sad but they way you used your words and said things was great! i love it when you can use poetry for an english class, we were supose to have a poetry unit this year but i don't think it's gonna happen :( so i just write poems for my paper. i hope your holding out ok! stay strong,

~PLP~ lil angel~ hugs & love forever

That was one of the best poems ever, it's so amazing!! You expressed yourself so amazing and perfect, I truely LOVE your poems, they always stays in my heart and makes me think about my own life!!! Great job....

*Love n' hugs Sabrina*

this is not crap, it has great meaning and i really like it. i bet you got an excellent grade for this too. awesome poem!! 5/5

love always...*hugs*

awesome poem. i really liked it. thanks for the great comments. and for adding me to your favs! your on mine too!

reminds me of me. thats really good. keep it up
~Freak~

great poem. i love it. keep up the great work!
Colin... says:
like when i get on u dont even talk to me
tasha...i'm special...lol Abbey says:
when was this?

lol..oops..sorry bout that...i didn't mean to do it..my computer is freakin out on me..but oh well..anyways..great poem..haha..

Baby this is amazing..well done keep up the great work love ya xx 5/5

I think it's beautiful

Why do u say your stuff is crap, I don't understand that! U c your rate, u r so high up, it's like OMG. I LUV YO WORK!!! Stay tight, Kal! Peace+Luv=From Me :p Haha BYE