My Storm

by Renee   May 4, 2005


I want to hear the thunder
I want to taste the rain
I want to see the lightning, taking the shape of my veins
clouds slit the skin of the sky
like midnight razorblades
rain pours out of open scars
like blood seeping out of my wrists
lightning strikes
thunder has its fits
rain pelts me like angry fists
I\'m in danger
but I love these storms.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    ooo.. pwetty ^.^

  • 19 years ago

    by Elynnka

    i like the storms and thunder and stuff like that...well done, i liked how you compared nature elements to body elements...
    check out my poems when you have time, thx:)
    keep it up *hugs*

    ~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Renee

    thanks for your comments, they mean a lot!

  • 19 years ago

    by rachel

    wow amazin poem i love it well dunxxx
    stay strong and keep writin

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