Holly, great one it flows beautifully from line to line, glad to see your posting more often, I always look forward to the read.
5/5
Dave.....

very well done yet again! Keep up the superb standard ( 0_o)

wow, that was a great poem. You have to really listen to understand what your saying, and you say it very powerful.........I loved it, I'm a little new here, but I have read most of your poems, and they are all very well written, you sound like an incredaible person...............Love ya Becky

Amazing work! Its a beautiful poem and you have talent girl! Keep writing!! Lovin your poems! Lotsa luv, Gem xx (thanx 4 da comments 2!)

Ver interesting. I find it hard sometimes as well to be my own person and not what other people want me to be. I must say though, i'm happier with the former.

Miss Holly, you are too amazing. Keep it up hunz! lOve you. 5

Heather

Of course this is a "5", who ever voted lower is obviously jealous of your talent, but I deal with it all the time..lol. Truly beautiful poem my dear..please continue to write, I love them all. Love, Tim