Im sorry to hear about that. I know what you felt like that day. Like three weeks ago I lost my dad and he went right infront of my andit scared me. You feel like nothing is right anymore. You just want them back so much but its too late.

awww tu for comenting on my poem i'm so srry to hear about your dad thats so sad, i just hate loseing someone so close cause the everything u look at or do remembers u of that loved one u have lose

id like to thank u guys for commenting on my poem it means so much to me

that was really great! so sweet and very sad! touching! keep it up! 5/5

I LOVE IT.. its soo sad.. but so strong.. great writing skills.. keep it up