Comments : Greatest Fear

  • 19 years ago

    by Trisha

    hun, do guys ever understand? nope. not unless they are your best friend, but thats different, because they understand your love for everyone else, but if it came to you loving them, they wouldnt have a clue. i love the poem chica- 5/5. look at a couple of mine?

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    i'm sorry that's a true story...heartbreak is hard to take. you have some really great phrasing in there and the form is lovely.

    "Don't want to be look at,"

    *looked

    Great job. Hope you find someone who understands! Take care.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Trisha

    Aww.....sorry it took me so long to comment back. I like this poem. Its touching. :(