Last Breath

by Just Sierra   May 4, 2005


As I take my last breath
and I hold the knife
I say goodbye
to a horrible life

Fair well to the misery
and all the pain
and hope one day
I will see you again

I grip the knife
tightly in my palm
one fast slit
then ill be gone

I take a deep breath
ok here I go
But no matter what please note
I will always love you!

~!~! By MeGaN~!~!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    You are a good poet!
    YES!

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    Hey, well, jami ended it with me, she had her reasons though, we are still friends, im glad you like new poems. ive been feeling weird lately im not sure why, its hard to explain so ya. sorry, wish i could go more into detail about it but i cant. sorry. well i hope your doing ok? hope to hear from you more often ok. peace out God bless. Much Love

    Nick

  • 19 years ago

    by In_Your_Eyes

    Dark and sad, but still a good poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    Its so good to hear from you again. thank you for your support. i have been waiting to talk to you. thank you so much for your comments. ive been felling down lately. im not sure why. and that seems to be the big problem. i dont know why im hurting. but im huring. my heart is unsure of how much longer i can take. i just hope its long enough. thank you. its so good to hear from you once more. hope to hear from you again soon. Much Love

    Nick

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Beautiful poem :)
    -A