by Rocky May 5, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
This body of mine is getting weak |
by fallentears
All your poems are brillant. I love this poem xxx |
Aww this is so depressing...hope your ok. Nice write. <3333 |
by ASPHYXIATED
cool poem good flow and can i say i love your pic i love him well back to the point, it was a really good poem i like your work x) |
This is a very deep write - Just one suggestion the line "When your away" it should be "you're" instead of "your". Other than that i like the depth in which you write, emotional and heart felt. Great work .. |
i love it rocky....i can totally relate to u. |