Very well written. Easy to relate with. Keep it up!

I love it! It flows smoothly and the emotion is deep.. Keep strong and take care ((always)) :

*> : PainOfOne

you duffus, you say to me not to diss on mine, but you diss on yours! lol, your deranged. but i submitted a new poem as well, check it out. by the way, that was a good poem, lol
love always
your friend
harley