My pain

by Amanda   May 5, 2005


Walking down a winding road,
suddenly I stop and see,
someone who's very teary,
she's looking just like me,

Why is this girl sat crying,
where or what is her pain,
Maybe if I talk to her,
she'll open up to me again,

I went to sit beside her,
she pushed me right away,
I begged for her to tell me,
she said here is where i stay,

Ask her why she chose this place,
she replied - it's usually unknown,
because it's just a lonely road,
where I can hide to be alone,

She told me what was hurting,
and that she had so much,
but all she really needed,
was a normal motherly touch,

She wants to be loved and hugged,
through all the hurt and pain,
Going through the bullying,
and at home when it's insane,

This girl didn't want very much,
I could've asked her this before,
nobody even listens to her now,
she's left crying on the floor.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    this was a real good poem i liked it alot I gave it a 5 because you brought out alot of emotion and you made the reader understand the girl great job!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    Great job please dont hurt yourself so there will be more good poems. God Bless you

  • 19 years ago

    by James

    aww amanda this is very say poem :( but well written....I hope you are ok just hang in there :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    hey nada, its not a mistake in the poem it is me looking at myself from the outside :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I hope your pain will go away and never come back! It was such a sad poem to read. You are a very talented girl. I can't keep up with you guys I still don't have any new poems lol. Well once again you did an amazing job! Take Care of yourself~ Brooke