Awwh hun, this is a very saddening poem. I hope that you are going to be okay <3 Stay strong.

||Kal.

5 stars for this one... thanks for toy're great comment =) i really meant a lot.. hugs

I meant It really meant a lot.. *stupid me* =)

Aww sweet Amanda, are you ok??? This poem is so sad and strongly written, I just want to take your pain away, cause you are such a great person and you don't deserve to be feeling like this!! I care about you, I don't want you to be sad!!! Please stay strong´....I'm here for you always!!

*Hugs n' Love always, Sabrina*

Amanda, This was truly a great poem. Filled with emotion and sadness. Great job my friend, hope you're O.K. hugs, love, *Ann*

Very nicely written hon. 5/5. Hold strong doll

Much Love
-xx-
~Broken Inside~

I hope your pain will go away and never come back! It was such a sad poem to read. You are a very talented girl. I can't keep up with you guys I still don't have any new poems lol. Well once again you did an amazing job! Take Care of yourself~ Brooke

hey nada, its not a mistake in the poem it is me looking at myself from the outside :)

aww amanda this is very say poem :( but well written....I hope you are ok just hang in there :)

Great job please dont hurt yourself so there will be more good poems. God Bless you

this was a real good poem i liked it alot I gave it a 5 because you brought out alot of emotion and you made the reader understand the girl great job!!!!