This, to me, sounded like a venting poem. Just letting out all the emotion and things that have been frustrating you, and I'm not saying that's a bad thing, the best poems are written from that.
I don't think this was one of your better pieces, but I did enjoy it. I like the last stanza and how, well for me at least, it made it a bit more personal, I'm not exactly sure why. But it's good. :]

Tammie

Ever wonder how people can hurt others so bad and act like everything is fine.. I have. This poem means a lot to me.. I guess you just have to be the best person you can be and hope everything works out. Good people can't be unhappy forever right? I don't know if that means anything to you, but great poem anyway. 5/5 --John

I'm crazy about the way you write