Sweet poem. I'll start with what I liked. I like happy poems and friendship poems, this seems to say, "I want to be your friend, and will try hard to make it stay that way even if you have personal "insecurities," and that's good. It makes me feel nice inside, like a friendship poem should. Ok now the other bits...The first three stanzas where well presented, but the last two went off beat and flow, maybe a slight adjustment to the wording would sort that out. Nice work, keep writing.

5/5 great poem w/tru meaning. please chack out some of my poems???

For your friend who ever it may be they would love it and it would hold alot more power but to a perfect stranger I think you would need something more intense well its just my thoughts...

wow.. very good... FIVE!!

wow... very cute:) I can relate to it

Great poem! 5.0 I can also realte a lot to this poem!

Wonderful poem, i really liked it.