hey, pretty good. It sounds like you could add another stanza on though. Anyways, I liked it, good job. Thanks for the comment. 5/5

~no more

iam thinking this poem is about u and ur (ex) bf and this girl split you guys up...well if thats true iam sorry to hear. and nice poem. 5/5 peace out and rock on!
Love Always,
Cheesey Chimpmunk
(my nickname)

Great poem, but I agree with no more other than that nice work. <3333

Nice Poem...
and thatnks for the comments u left on mine :P

luv KimiC XOXOX

great poem 5/5