And then it's not

by ~Amy~   May 5, 2005


Your days are going well
Your life is finally right
As far as you can tell
There's no nightmares at night
You always want to smile
Anything makes you laugh
You're no longer in denial
You cherish every moment you have

But...

Then you let down your guard
And things start to get worse
You fall, and you hit hard
And then comes all the hurt
And now you get confused
Cuz everything had been so good
And it has caught you by surprise
And put you in a crazy mood

I've learned that when this happens
It's because you have lost sight
Of the things that make you happy
Or the things that are right
So try to do the right thing
No matter what you've got
Because one day life might be all good
But then the next it's not

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  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Aidyns right chickie your a talented girl:) I love your message in this poem... It got me thinking, Keep writting and dont give up hope, what happens is because of fate:) 5/5

    Pure Silencex0x0x

  • 19 years ago

    by Aidyn

    Thanks for the comments, Amy! Just to clarify, I can't give comments on love poems and frienship poems. Anyways, your latest poem, Alone, is absolutely amazing. It is your best, in my opinion. It was a five from me, with no doubts whatsoever. Keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Aidyn

    So true, and great as always! Keep writing, Amy!