Tuesday (true story)

by Becca1111   May 5, 2005


Once there was a girl,
Her name was Tuesday,
She rarely listened to her parents,
She just did things her own way,
Until one day,
Her parents called her and her brother into the living room,
And they told them,
Their father was going to war,
The day that he left on the bus,
Tuesday and her mother cried,
Her brother just stood there in disbelief,
Her father was gone,
With school stress and the fear of her father never coming back,
Tuesday had been sad since the 5th grade,
One night as she sat in her room,
She had spotted her math compass on the floor,
She wondered what it would be like,
So she picked it up,
Placed it on her left inner forearm,
And drug it to towards her elbow,
Now Tuesday had crossed the line between sad and severely suicidal,
She knew, but she didn't care,
The cheery , happy girl that everyone had known,
Is now gone.

(i wrote this poem about the memory of about 1 month when my dad had gotten deployed 17 months ago.) ~please vote and comment .... it would mean a lot to me.

much love,
becca

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  • That is so sad....i love it ......thanx 4 reading mine tho

  • 17 years ago

    by bobo2011

    Really deep and really good. please tell me that you didnt cut yourself though...

  • 18 years ago

    by Becca1111

    Thankies.. :') jess

    lylas always,
    becca

  • 18 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    Aww thats so sad! but great poem =D jesxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Becca1111

    Tankies nadia.... :)