I liked the way you painted a picture, it was vivid, it was inviting, maybe other choses of words to make the emotion deep-more detailed, overall the story of the poem was good, it was clear

Wow...this one is great...i really like it..i can feel the pain you felt...5/5

xoxo
KAyla

This poem was very cliche. I have read so many akin to it before and most using many of the same rhymes as yours. At times the rhyme felt forced and this was kind of a plow-through to read. Keep writing.

good poem.... deep sad .
its long but has meaning and kept me intrested.

Jacs
xxx

Its was brill but disturbing ha ha but it was cool that it showed one person can affect so many people, and Im only 13 but even I know good stuff when i see it.....

this poem is really good, i'll look into your others, if you get a chance review some of mine n tell me what you think...

good work robert

long poem but well worth the read

That is an excellant poem explainin how someone wanted a way out. couple of weeks ago I felt just like this and the feeling doesn't always go away it has this time my b/f has helped me thru it - plz read some of my poems and put some complains in so tht I can make them better.

depressing but the type of poems im into...great poem 5.

Unduly emotional - quite a drag really; couldn't read it halfway.

Sad. I liked it.

you were correct robert i really enjoyed reading this poem great job...
it was very deep...
tanx for the help on my poems il try it when i have time x)
i gave this a 5

Hey, Robert. I saw you commented my poems, so I decided to take the time to read this one. It can really shine the light on things. Please, keep writing.

An interesting topic to dsy the least, it certainly opens ups your eyes to some deeper emotions and concepts.

Keep Writing
Nici

REAL CUTE ROB... CAN i CALL U ASS?

Well-written. A bit cluttered in format, but very expressive.
-Kate

what a powerful poem. its an incredible writing and from the third person's point of view. very unique. keep up the great writing and thanx for commenting on my poem

This was amazing, no words can describe your talent take care and keep writing xxx

Wow