u must have really liked the ppl u were writing bout. that must have felt really bad. but i really liked ur poem

i think that ur poem is really great and i hope that u write some more soon

I really like this poem. Its filled with sad emotion..which i am most definetly like. I am terribly sorry you miss your siblings, i know it can be rough, but you have to stick it through. You will see them again. Take care, and good job on your poem!

-Jennifer.