I still love you

by Poetic Tragedy08   May 5, 2005


The cry of the soul
The murder of the skin
The sob of heart
The darkness of sin
I'm deep in my thoughts
I feel like dying
Upon this grass
Is where I'm lying
Strike me down
For you've brought me up
I feel like nothing
You won't even say whats up
Death is one man
I deeply respect
I'll turn around
And pay him my debt
My soul I will
Hand to him
He'll make me feel best
In my every whim
Look into my eyes
As I die
And maybe you'll find it in you
To love me again and not lie
I know you've moved on
It's something I can feel
Now it's time
I pay my bill
Raise your glasses to death
And I'll die next to you
Watch me die baby
You know this too
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Brandy, have a better life with Chad!

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  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Dude..This has great discribtion!!!(spelling is wrong but im lisa :D)
    It was written with great anger, most good poems need a good beginning to get people stuck at the begining of a poem and man was yours great.."The cry of the soul
    The murder of the skin
    The sob of heart
    The darkness of sin"

    They were such great works theway you commpared them was great and it had me stuck from the begining..the flow was great like always and I loved it like always lol :D
    Im in a god mood so I won't complain bout haw great you are :D

    x)