Dude..This has great discribtion!!!(spelling is wrong but im lisa :D)
It was written with great anger, most good poems need a good beginning to get people stuck at the begining of a poem and man was yours great.."The cry of the soul
The murder of the skin
The sob of heart
The darkness of sin"

They were such great works theway you commpared them was great and it had me stuck from the begining..the flow was great like always and I loved it like always lol :D
Im in a god mood so I won't complain bout haw great you are :D

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