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i like this poem its sad and very deep. i like they style and the way that is was written i liked the repetition it was an awesome write all around great job

hey awesome poem! it was really well written! very creative! i also liked how it flowed! and the style ya wrote it in! Keep up da great work! 5/5
Also if its not much dya think u can check out some of my poems and tell me wut ya think?....thanx in advance!
Byez!
~Luvz~
~Chica~

very creative! awesomely written! 5/5

Intruigingly done....I liked it.

Hey, i really liked that poem. It was very well written and unique.....really good!