Comments : 5 Attempts

  • 19 years ago

    by xBrOkEnX

    hey, that was a REALLY good poem, i LOVED it! keep up the good work! and good luck with life!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lyla

    Hey, i really liked that poem. It was very well written and unique.....really good!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Intruigingly done....I liked it.

  • 19 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    very creative! awesomely written! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Angie

    hey awesome poem! it was really well written! very creative! i also liked how it flowed! and the style ya wrote it in! Keep up da great work! 5/5
    Also if its not much dya think u can check out some of my poems and tell me wut ya think?....thanx in advance!
    Byez!
    ~Luvz~
    ~Chica~

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    i like this poem its sad and very deep. i like they style and the way that is was written i liked the repetition it was an awesome write all around great job