Wow. That story really touched me. I'm so sorry about what happened. My best friend Cade is in the hospital right now from a car accident. He's in a coma and is never going to be the same again. I'm glad your friend turned out okay. Anyway, I gave it a 5/5 which I rarely do. Feel free to Private message me. Or just leave a comment on one of my comments.
xoxo- Avery

:( that bout made me cry....thats soo sad..
the thing that came to my mind after i read that is that im a pyro and i love fire... it also made me think of the quote : "The most beautiful things are often the most dangerous."

ur a good writter keep it up.

I'am so sorry to hear wat happened to your boyfriend, hope his ok, great poem and keep writing, I like to hear more. Thanks for your email, I hope to be writing another poem soon. thankyou for your comment, bye 4 now clairlouis xx

wow...that's a real sad story. your poem is really really good. I liked your rhyming schemes. keep writing. if u can tell brandon I'm glad he's ok.

Omg, that's horrible I'm sorry!!<3 :( Good writing though, I really liked it.

Keep in touch...<3 Tori

wow, omg I dont know what to say!! I am so sorry! Excellent write though. Take care. <3333

I loved this poem. It's so sad. And I'm sorry about what happened. 5/5

-Ice

Thats a great story katie. i loved reading it. keep up the good work. -Mike

Wow so intense! Very sad true story! It must have been hard to write about such a tragic event. Take Care! Brooke~

really touching! keep it up!
~*Ashli*~

Wow that was so scary and sad...My friend's house burned down in a fire, it is such a scary situation...I am so happy your friend is doing well now. excellent write. xxx

id love to talk to him sometime. he seems to need support right? :] i hope he feels good because even when bad things happen you can heal.

aww how sad!! it was very well written and i'm sure he would like this! Great job! i loved this! 5/5

aw man, that is so horrible.. lol.. not the poem! the situation!!! lol.. the writing is great!! good job, again!
peace,
Abcede :)

Good job Sorry about your friend though have a good day

Wow...Amazing ...A young boy from our Elementary school was once playing with a lighter, he liked the sound it made when you pressed the button...Then on an accident he sparked it and his whole face and upper body caught on fire...It was devastating, he had to wear a clear plastic mask for 8 months, and he was only 10...
Good Job
5/5
Ash