My Sweet Suicide

by DeAnna   May 6, 2005


I'm not afraid.
I'll grab the knife.
I won't be afraid
to take my own life.

My life sucks.
I just want it to end.
My life sucks.
It's not able to mend.

People have come and gone
trying to make me better.
Everyone should just give up now
because I'm writing my suicide letter.

No one will have to worry
No one will have to care.
Everyone knows that death and I
make the perfect pair.

Death has been my friend
for such a long time.
Death is that only reason
that all my words rhyme.

So I'll take the knife
I'll cut really deep.
I'll soon be gone,
but please don't weep.

The cuts won't close
and the scars won't heal.
I won't be able to hurt.
I won't be able to feel.

I'll bleed and bleed,
and I'll bleed some more.
They'll find me stone cold,
sprawled out on the floor.

I'll be out of my misery.
I'll soon be free.
I want out; this life sucks,
Don't you agree?

I have a dream to be gone
I'll take myself with the knife.
I won't have to suffer anymore
I won't have to deal with this life.

Just let me go.
I'll be happy elsewhere.
No one will ever miss me.
They don't even really care.

Just let me die.
Give me that one treat.
I'll have a perfect suicide,
and it will be so sweet.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poetically Broken

    Wow I don't know what to say, It's a great poem, the flow was great, one of the best I've seen.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow! AWESOME POEM! i love it! damn it gave me flashbacks! alot!...of when i used to feel that way..whoa! gave me the chills! fantastic poem!

    great writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    I really like this poem and i relate to it a lot. I dont think i could have written a poem that good though
    Well i enjoyed this poem a lot 5/5
    Read and comment some of my poems if ya like keep up the great work

  • 18 years ago

    by alana

    Wow thats a great poem but hun ive been there ta the bottom n back up ta were i am now..
    jus hang in there kiddo! hold your chin high n jus believe n things will get better..
    thanks for the comment:)
    much love...

  • 19 years ago

    by eyesxshutxtite

    Hey , thanx 4 the comment.. o wow this poem, is really WOW .. lol.. i dont know what 2 say.. its GOOD! 5/5.. l8ta!
    XxAmandaxX