Wow, I really liked this piece! The flow made it very easy to read. I especially liked the imagery, your words painted a beautiful picture~Holly

that was good.. i likd how those hand had punch some screaming fools. you got a away with words

brilliant! x x x

Lol i never thought i could like a poem about hands this much before. You have an insane amount of talent for something that everyday to sound so beautiful. Excellent work.
-A

i really like the flow of it. it makes it easier for me to read n it also draws a pic for me to see. nicely done

Enjoyed this write, the flow was just superb. hugs, love, *Ann*

nice. i liked it. it was creapy, i actually imagined what your hands look like...creapy, yet orgasmic. lol. jk. nah, but i like this one. your really improving as a writer.keep it up.
nancy

It's really great, one of your best ones, I think. A masterpeice, for sure.

Keep up the great work.

Sabine

Wow...that was great! It's really weird to look back on all the events in our lives and realize all we've accomplished. It seems like only yesterday...

Very deep. I liked this poem so much. Great work:)

I loved this poem, its amazing how much can be said about a persons hand,,,,,,,I read an email once and I will try to fiqure out out tosend it to you, I have it saved in a folder, you would truly appreciate it....great job, I think a mans hands tellthe story better than the man can with words. I love mens hands, rough, soft, hard, gentle, they tell so much about who you are.......loved it again great write. Love ya Becky

that is so beautiful i loved it. it is kinda inspirational you know to tell us that we could do a lot as long as we believe. is that right?
much love
~michelle~

Deep. Beautiful. I like it.

xxx

"pulled a string and stopped a war" -ingenious.

Another reason why you're on my favorites list.

5/5.

Really nice flow. awesome job, im adding you to my favorites.

Stroked a soul till it awaked
((But I Loved this line.. It was.. perfect.))
Stroked a soul till it awaked
Clenched a fist until it ached
((Lost rhyme here.))

I very much enjoyed this poem. It was interesting to read.. Though I have no idea what 'These Hands' are... Perhaps you could explain it to me? Anyways, may I make a suggestion: Use punctuation. You have unpeckable flow, but with punctuation your poems will be flawless. =]

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

Ok, this is a pretty good poem. But it's somewhat contradictory. I'd expect hands that stopped a war, been nationwide, etc...to be rough and worn. Not silken. I don't really like that idea. The word "stroked" seems out of place as well. Too soft sounding

I will do that i love to learn considering im only in sixth grade im so curious i love to write and learn i will definatly go out and buy a thesaurus