grr on whoever voted it a 1. its a great poem *hiss*
~Freak~

this is good but srry tht it had to happen!! Alwasy believe in love and trust in god!!!!!
-Britt

Great poem! It flowed so well and was so sad though too! I'm sorry about that happening too...
Much Love....
Haily

Full of so much true emotion! Very well written! I hope things will work out for you in the end. 5/5 Take Care~ Brooke

Wow thats...uh... Really Good!!!
I am very Impressed!!!
Keep it up!!

Great poem and once again it flowed well and rhymed well.... I thought it was amazing except the content was sad. Hope everything works out for you!

Very emotional, and a most pleasant read...really great, I just hoped It was not true...

An interesting poem.
I hate the topic. Bad person/choice. But it's not my place to judge.

Complaints: You really need punctuation to help the flow and you need to learn to spell. Other wise, it's not too bad.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 4.5

I found this to be very sad.
I thought the flow was off in a couple of places, but apart from that you did a wonderful job and a sad topic.

Wow! i hope that didnt really happen but if it did im glad u regret it...also on ur profile it says ur from indiana which part? im from there too...

Why wasn't I there, what a disgrace,

but I just stood there I couldn't bare
how you'd feel when you found out,

its a good poem, but i felt that it might have been to long!!

5/5

Wow! this was feel wih emotion n regret.
so sad.. but we learn from owr mistakes.
i love it. nicly writen..

take care,
Frenchy