aint bad at all. this is a 5. very interesting and i liked it.

not bad at all, love it!

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Very good poem, sorry you are feeling this way, I hope that you can find comfort in someone, I am sure people are there for you, well done, keep it up

oh :( this was beautiful..I ♥ DAVEY TOO!!..love him, love him, love him!

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>:O How could you say that is bad?! In my opinion, that is your best. Don't decide whether your work is good or bad, let the other people decide that. That's what voting's for. :) Speaking of voting, you get a five. Thanks for commenting.
-LydaRose-