Thanks for commenting on my poem
Also Terri, what exactly did you want me to tell you more about. Just wondering

Another great one.

Love,
Tiff

my favorite part was this: So here's my last words
My final goodbye
Don't be sad
And please don't ask why.
I dont know why, but i just loved that part ^-^ its so sad though!

Oh, this was too sad. It was really good, though :) The flow was off in some places, but it's easily overlooked by how much emotion is in the poem.

I like this piece. The flow does get off a lot, and tge word choice could be stronger but I like this piece. Great job with emotion cause it just overflows in this piece

I like this piece. The flow does get off a lot, and tge word choice could be stronger but I like this piece. Great job with emotion cause it just overflows in this piece