Voices in My Head

by Kayla   May 6, 2005


I hear these whispers
Softly in my ear
"Don't hold on,
The end is here"
I don't have anything
And I'm tired of trying to pretend
I open my arms, close my eyes
And I finally meet my end
My body is shaking
As I reach for my pen
This suicide note
I will never see again
The voices in my head
Have completely won
I'm tired of fighting them
I am entirely done

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  • 18 years ago

    by lisa marie

    Eh suicide poems are never my favorite but this poem is overall good. the only thing i would advise you to do is to put

    "I'm tired of trying to pretend"

    instead of

    "and i'm tired of trying to pretend"

    It just makes it flow better and when you write because sometimes it's good not start the lines out with and, but, so, and so on.

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    Good poem! I liked it.

    Tiffany.xox.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    Wow i can c that u have a hard life and u may want to end it and i don't think that death is a solution to anything...but u r a GREAT poet and i love the way that u write and the message that your poems sends out...5/5..keep up the great work...keep them coming...
    love always
    þrÈ¢Ìð§å

  • 18 years ago

    by oldthings

    Don't stop fighting =( ='( once again great rythm, and relateable yep yep. thanx for sharing

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