Your Eyes

by UM   May 6, 2005


When I looked in your eyes for the first time,
a twinkle looked back at me.
A brief flash of possibility,
of maybe what could be.
A second look trapped me,
floating in your gaze,
pulling me deeper,
unwilling to let me go.
From that point on,
there was no need for a third look.
It was then that I knew,
I was in love with you.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Ah yes very touching. I really enjoyed this one. Short and sweet:) I dont know if i quite believe in love at first sight, i guess ill have to see it to believe it. Could you check out my poem "innocence"?

    Ana

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Not bad, I thought it was rather cute actually. It's amazing how much we lose , yet find just by the gaze of someone's eyes. 5/5

    Love,
    Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Good poem, i liked the thought about it, but i couldn't give it a five in all honesty. There is a problem with the beats if you count them down, i know it is a minuate detail but when i look at the first line compared to the rest, it just doesn't add up.

    Four/Five.

    P.S. thank you for your continueing input i really appriciate all your input and no matter how many times you point out my grammer, i am not going to solve it i don't think. LOL unless going to my friends father who is an english teacher and getting him to correct it lol. (retired).

  • 19 years ago

    by Mike G

    Simply captivating. I can so relate to this poem as so many others probably can as well. Great job of bringing those feelings to life. Keep up the good work.

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