Simply captivating. I can so relate to this poem as so many others probably can as well. Great job of bringing those feelings to life. Keep up the good work.

Good poem, i liked the thought about it, but i couldn't give it a five in all honesty. There is a problem with the beats if you count them down, i know it is a minuate detail but when i look at the first line compared to the rest, it just doesn't add up.

Four/Five.

P.S. thank you for your continueing input i really appriciate all your input and no matter how many times you point out my grammer, i am not going to solve it i don't think. LOL unless going to my friends father who is an english teacher and getting him to correct it lol. (retired).

Not bad, I thought it was rather cute actually. It's amazing how much we lose , yet find just by the gaze of someone's eyes. 5/5

Love,
Heather.

Ah yes very touching. I really enjoyed this one. Short and sweet:) I dont know if i quite believe in love at first sight, i guess ill have to see it to believe it. Could you check out my poem "innocence"?

Ana