Torn Soul

by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE   May 6, 2005


Break me into pieces
That makes me now unwhole
Take my life away from me
Including my torn soul
Ruin my only conscience
That tells me to do wrong
Then take away my strength
So i can no longer be strong
Break my heart and shatter it
Leave me tattered in ribbons of disguise
Take the emotions from my dreams
And leave me here to die
Ruin all my beauty
And take the things you can't comprehend
Take the feeling from my scars
With no intent to help them mend
Then take away my loneliness
To help me realize
That these things won’t matter now
If this pain I can’t disguise
Then leave me here to die
In this pain so deep
Only being able to watch
The lonely blood that seeps
Take away the tears, now red
That fall from my eyes and down my face
Then build me my own grave
Because my sanity you couldn't trace
Then I’ll finally die
And I will be buried in my own grave
Because this soul you see
You simply could not save.

~Madison Kay Leigh~ April 29th 2005

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    by Ashli

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    by Mandy Lou

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    by Andrea

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