wow thats really really really good...expecially the last 2 lines...i love it.. great job

OMG!!! this was totally AWSOME!!!!!!! i give u a 5. keep up the good work. Always believe in love and trust in God!!
-Britt
one question b4 i go. Has she read this? if so that could possible change things.

i hope you and yr x will find yr way 2 getther again...

Wow... this poem is fantastic, really. I can't even pick a favorite part, I can relate to all of it. I love it. Great job, keep it up.

Love,
Tiff

This is an amazing poem... you are a great writer... when I read your stuff I can hear your emotion...Great job
Much Love
Xox Sherrie

I loved it. it was so sweet. i really felt the pain.

Wow...
This was just ...wow.
I'm in awe of this poem.
it was beautiful.
My favourite line was:

I laid my soul down at your feet.

This is one of my favourites on the site.

Wow! first off id like to thank you for your comment on my poem, I appreciate all constructive criticism. second, I just wanted to tell you that your right beautifully and your ex doesnt know what shes missing!!

keep it up!

Ufffhhhh....brought tears to my eyes...but once u got over it and when u look back its like a wonderful feelin coz u knew, that time u truly loved her and now...no matter how much ud like to remember her,its all gone....that is only when ur totally over her..