by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE May 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Into darkness i must dwell |
by Ashli
you are such a talented writer! definitely keep it up! 5/5 |
by Mandy Lou
I really liked the repitition! It kept it interesting! 5/5! This was a great poem! |
by Lydie
Wow - that sounds like me.. I have a poem called the real me you should read it - tell me what you think |
by Areyoucrazy
Love the flow .,.. great job |
by Jason Meres
Very well worded. |