by Lindsay C
this one is really great! filled with meaning and emotion! keep it up! |
by Queen Marlene
omg.. this is so good... yet sad.. im sorry if ur going through rough times but we all have our ups and downs thats life honeii... it sux.... i wish you the best and keep writing.. |
by AJ
wow, thats really good. I can relate. good job. |
by tashhh
wow...that's all i can say |
by Miss Jessica
Hey awesome poem!!! I can relate in so many ways. It's a great poem. Check out some of mine if you want to. That was great. 5/5. |
by Robert
Other then this being a feel sorry for me poem what is the true message your conveying her because if thats it I am not impressed... |
by NoPatience
5/5 i love ur work keep it up n dont let no 1 bring u down EVER MWAHZZZ |
Wow, this poem is amazing. It's so emotional, I feel your pain. Good job. |
WOW that is my favorite poem so far of yours!!! |
by Amanda
So sad but amazing. I like the structure of this poem! Excellent piece. It was full of emotion and feeling. :) |
That was a great poem! 5.0 I feel the same way! lol plz return the favor by voting and commenting on 6 of poems! thanx ♥ |
WOW! I liked this a lot! It was sooo sad too! |
by Robert
for being invisable you created a wonderful picture of pain ace. hmmm maybe this title should be changed what do you think?... |
I Loved The Way You Included Those Colors Inside Your Poem It Was Very Descriptive I ENJOYED My Read!! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
ANother greaat poem! you're very talented! 5.0 Mayb u cud check out my poemz one day! Thanx ♥ |
by karma
i think u write really good poems |
by †JustAriâ€
excellent once more! 5/5 makes life seem bitter all over again lol as if it already wasn't.....Peace! //ari\\ |
i like, 5 :) |
by Ashli
good job! keep it up! loved it! |
by Emily
Depressing, sounds kinda like a My Chemical Romance song... |