Hey great poem! I dont know if you really feel like that, but I do. Anyway, 5/5! great job! Keep up the good work, if you can will you look at mine? (Most of mine are stupid but my oldest ones are the best cause i JUST wrote them)

~me~

I actually do like your form. It's a mixture of free lance and rhyming. More on the rhyming side, but it still wasn't bad. Read some of my work if you find the time.

hey, thanx everyone. i'll be sure to check out all of your work when i have the chance! thanx again!

Wow, that was cool! 5/5!
Katie

I like that style of writing... I can't rhyme worth a darn!

ohhh... wow, i love it emma! sad, but its wonderfully written... i absolutely love it.... i think i might print it out... hmm...

.:kelly:.

wow this was way different from something id rite ... it makes a lot of sense tho i enjoyed reading it thanks for sharring.