nice i loved it 5/5 keep up

*hUGZ*

OUTSTANDING! The rhyme in this poem was perfect and I just loved it. Great work. This one just put you as one of my favorites. Keep them coming:)

FIRST OFF THANK YOU FOR COMMENTING ON MY POEM! THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL, BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES! 5!

wow that is realy sad :( and it went straight to my heart!

To write a poem, with such an unadvanced language and a message as clear as that, in such a way as you have done, is a most remarkable feat.

I am impressed...The flow is almost flawless...And the rhymes work out perfectly...You fill the poem to the edge with emotions, and managed to keep me interesting despite of it being long..

Great job!

I just love this poem so much that I had to re-read it. I'm anxiously waiting a new poem from you.

~Amanda~