Comments : Give me the chance.

  • 19 years ago

    by gabs

    wow im speachless... that was such a powerful poem it made me just want to keep reading it again and again , i never thought that a guy would express them selves to a girl like that ... keep writing you have alot of good stuff!!!!!

    gabby

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    You have a real talent for writing! Very good job! Your sadness can really be felt in this write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    You have a real talent for writing! Very good job! Your sadness can really be felt in this write.

  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    This poem was reeealllyyy lllloooonnnnggg but omg it was so worth reading you did an exellent job!!! another 5/5