Hell Within My soul

by Jason Partin   May 7, 2005


Cut my veins,
and watch blood boil,
sense the pain,
I've longed to toil.

Fresh cut veins,
blood running free,
releasing the devil,
subsided in me.

Rendered in me,
I feel the fire,
my veins submerge,
as my pressure soars higher.

My longing heart,
will never beat clean.
The best of its days,
have all been seen.

As my body drains,
away this Hell,
there is still a part,
of this story to tell.

My soul is now free,
free from tomorrow.
Now there is no pain,
but most of all sorrow.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Well your title is so attractive and the content are so good i like the way you wrote it although it's kindda freaky
    keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Mullinax

    jason, i am so proud of you...you finally got a last stanza *tear* and this poem is awesome...yay! -lol- *ashley rates a 5*

  • 19 years ago

    by stephalee

    this is super good u r such a good writter keep it up!