I understand what your completly saying... I really liked it you expressed your self well keep on writing it's very well how you write... this poem I really really can understand. There is always someone there even if we don't realize it.... great job ~Britney~ ps a 5~

Thanks for you comments Brit! It always makes me feel better about my stuff. And thanks to anyone else who decides to comment. LOL

Heyhey although technically speaking I don't think its your best written I think its probably a really honest poem and as such deserves the praise: "Excellent Poem!"