by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи May 7, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Lying Relentlessly |
It got a little cliche at the end, but it was still very beautiful great job 5/5 |
by LoreNz0
Beautiful message and an equally beautiful poem once again. keep writing. |
Hey that was an awsome poem. everytime was 5/5, the flow, rhyming, words, message. it's so true too. we need to stop faking it and preforming 4 everyone else. b/c if we do that, so can every1 else. anyways fantastic poem. i loved it. |
Wow..its awesome..truely amazing..your so damn talented.. |
I know exactly what you mean.. i can never take my advice either no matter how hard i try.. you are an amazing poet. oh yeah this is Jason comment back =) |