GREAT POEM! N I KNOW WUT U MEAN! 5/5

This is such a good poem...i know exactly what u mean...but i prayed 4 my angel 4rm above and i got him...
5/5

I like how this is short and compact, and still has alot to it. The words you have choosen are very effective at portraying your feelings and the descriptions work well. I'd suggest changing the last line because it sounds as if it was put there just to complete the rhyme and so the poem doesn't end as well as it could.