by Robert May 7, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
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Great job.. the beging is very romantic. but as you continue to read i think you make it seem less romantic.. especially when you say "grind" |
by Taylor Lyn
I totally like this poem, but it should be placed in the explicit category, not the regular love category! The depth and imagery you created with your words is fantastic, a classic love scene! I enjoyed this poem! |
by Vanessa
Hot but not dirty, that takes talent. You did agood job with the word chose and the imagery, the flow was pretty good and the emtion was clear. 5/5 |
by Sweet lig
This is great poem thats all i can say thankssss |
by Mohamed
I just give 5/5 man it was great poem BRAVO |