very very nicely written. This is a hard transition in a relationship... especially if one of the pair isn't feeling more! You did a great job! |
by leanne
its funny you wrote this, my names leanne too and i feel exactly the same about a friend of mine |
by Laura Ash
I love this poem! I can really relate to it and I like the way you ryme. =] |
by ShootingStar
Sweeeett.hope you two will together(= |
I LOVED UR POEM KEEP UP THE GREAT JOB |
by xo kisses xo
This is an amazing poem. |
by ROSE
Kyaahh!!.wat a nice poem!^_^ |
by Aryaan
Theme is very good and interesting. i wouldn't say you've written it badly but i think it could have been better. vocab could have been stronger. just my thought... as a whole it's a nice one... good to read... keep writing. |
by DK
Great use of words, reminded me of what i wrote in the past... 2 years i've felt that way with that girl, then i was rejected before i even confessed. Before she left i gave her a compiled book of all my poems that i wrote for her, which was at that time all i had... (and deleted the soft copy, so only she had it, sorry guys/girls) whatever i post are the new ones. Back to topic, great work and keep the pen moving. |
by mikayla
I love this poem! |
by dandelion
I can relate to this poem.. its really great.. well written.. 5/5 |
by Fred
Wat an awesome poem!!!!! |
by MJ
All I can say is, this poem is pure magic. It really is beautiful. |
AMAZING. |
I think its safe to say that almost everyone has felt this way. In a few short stanza's you caught one of lifes most questioned troubles. Its elequently written and evokes a real sense of compassion and understanding. Great job! 5/5! |
by Hayley
Keep up the good work :P |
by Mr Trio
As someone who has been in the same position, I can only wish you the best of luck. |
by J4Y
REALLY SWEET POEM 10/10 X |
by msluckyone
Cute |
by jordan
OMG! i ask my boyfriend these questions all the time!! he always gives the perfect answer. before we became boyfriend-girlfriend. |