by alinaXonly1
Great!!! |
by yarelli12
GREAT POEM!! This reminds me so much of me and my boyfriend. That's how i felt every night before I took the risk and confessed how I felt. We're together and happier than ever.... |
by NiCoLe
AMAZING WORDS |
by ganjaru
Amazing! |
by los
Good work...check my out.. |
It's very true and it's happening with me right now |
This...is...amazing! I just told one of my best friends that i'm in love with him. I think it'll pay off |
by Brittany C
Good poem. It flowed ok but i think that it would flow even better if you were to break it up some. Other then that it was great. |
by Maggie
I love it!! Definitely reminds me of someone in my life. Very well written :) |
by Amreen
Ah so beautiful....just the best...! |
by Burning Angel
This is sooo godo. I love it!!!! |
by Pamela G
Very well written, I like the ending part; |
by catherin
Awesome awesome just awesome..loved it .. |
by Dark Shadows
You wrote it way back in 2003.Hope you told that person how you felt and all is well. |
Awsoomee.... |
Awsoomee.... |
by Pete Daniels
What a beautiful poem, such heartbreaking words of pure love, i love this poem. |
by Dark Shadows
Love suppressed is bound to explode someday and lives involved are messed up.Let the love flow.Love is divine life energy,when you lock it inside it dies of suffocation.Unrequited love is a stab in the heart, but the only way we can receive the love we seek - by expressing our desires to the person we love.You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back. |
What a way with words I like it a lote. |
by firexflys
I think maybe this is a great way of telling him how you feel... i also remember that when i told my best friend that i like him more then just friends we dated for almost 5 years. it ended and i did lose him as a friend but wow what a great first love.... anyway i think this is beautiful, full of feeling love the flow. |