Deep Within? was this real??

by Just Lucy   May 7, 2005


Love comes from deep within
like something from a dream
love is not a sin
but a broken heart does hurt
and it hurts more to me
than a bullet to my head
I've never experienced such pain
such a hurting from inside
he told me nothing more accept:
i was just his rebound girl
he was just using me for a laugh
while what i felt i was sure to be real
he left me shattered
falling to the floor
falling 6 feet under
maybe more
he was always there for me
I'd rather be in hell
than feel the breaking of my heart again
wishing this was a nightmare
feeling nothing but the empty hole
closing up, suffocating
dying midst deep breathes
and tears of red for broken hearts
wishing this was a nightmare
crying so hard my face felt numb
suffocating on my pillow
this is where i want to stay
no, love is not a sin
but being hurt like this
was what he did a sin?
it wasn't love to begin
hurting someone like that
selfish of him
selfish...that is a sin
he made me feel nothing within
no...that was not love...love is not a sin!

(C) Lucy Green

*ok so it isn't very good, but it is how i feel, and it is what he did, thanks for reading it though...Love Lucy*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dawson

    lucy thats really good

    lotta love MIKEY

  • awsome poem such a deep theme but one most of us have experienced..... great work love it!
    >>5/5<<
    bec

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    I'm sorry this happened to you....really great poem! stay strong
    xxxxxxxx