by Lost Girl
That was realy great, I like your style of poetry, I'm very impressed! Keep it up, stay strong |
Your visuals are magnificent, and this accompanied gore and morose in all of your poems exerts a live misery of your own...for only the author can paint a picture as acute of such somnolence. |
This is so unique and it moved me a lot. At first I couldn't realte to the shelf, but yet I think it fits perfectly to the whole poem. Espacially the third stanza is my fave one, I like your melodramatic style of writing, so keep it up. |