Message

by katie!   May 7, 2005


Hating being alive, with every cell in my body
Every day, a new challenge, a new way to lie
Let me run from this place, accelerating
Please don't leave me here to die

Melodramatic and I know it, let me cry
Everywhere, I want to escape, I want to fly

Pour your crimson agonys onto my body
Let me share the load which is destroying you
Elevate me, we can escape these bonds of terror
Alive, at last, I love you, Do you feel this too?
Say the words and I will take you in my arms
Escape from the temptation to commit self harm

*if you want to get the message, take the first letter from each sentence*

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  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Ups is says at the end of your poem how to get the message, I'm so stupid....Were too blind to see that, just because I wanted to get the message so badly =0)...But you still made me cry =0(

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Ohhh my God.....You made me cry now!!! I get the message, so heartbreaking and sad....You honestly made me cry Katie....

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I have read this againa and again and again ect and I still don't get "the message", I really wnat to, pleaseeee explain it to me.......There are so many perfect words in this one and it's written so well!!!

    Love Sabrina

  • 19 years ago

    by Victoria

    Wow amazing poem keep it up!

    take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    I had to read that like 5 times before i got the message....WOW! that is such a good poem...stay strong
    xxxxxxxxxxxxx

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