GREAT POEM. it made me cry!!!

this is a great poem! I liked it a lot u didnt forsce the rhyme in it you just let the words flow willingly. I hope this didnt happen to you and if so i am srry and hope u r ok. keep up the good work. Alwasy believe in love and trust in God!!!!!!!
-Britt

Amazing and so true i love it

that was great! such a sad story=(. it's true about not waiting to tell someone you love them. _hOlly

omg this is so sad..*tear* I almost cried! good job keep up the good work and take a look at my poems if u want to!
xoxo,
~*Sarah*~

very nice said god bless you

Wow, I seriously have tears in my eyes. I'm lost for words ... Amazing.

WOW that was awsom it made me cry keep it up nd take a look at my poems to cyazzz

hey that was a great poem....was it a true story?...keep up your good work!!!

Omg....this is so good!! it made me cry...i have a best friend that i love very much and he knows but he just wants to be best friends and thats it since he doesnt want to risk that.

although it may not b a true story i can relate to thoughs that have felt that love . great GREAT poem keep up the good work, thoughs 30 mins were worth it . i almost criied <3 Zoraida

awwwww this made me cry lol. its so true though. good point in writng this poem matthew! keep writing! 5/5
xoxo samara

When I read your poem I couldn't help
but tear:( Is this story true if I may ask? I'm in the situation with all what you said the same except, we both are still best friends than ever, but yeah he asked me out last year and wev'e become so close, after nine years I never knew it would come true!!! I Love Him So Much and I just want to let you know that I love your poem:)
Rose

omgosh! that was such a sad but excellent poem. it made me cry! im glad that its not true. WOW! thats amazing

This is the best poem I Have read on this website altogether....You really know how to get people into the things you are writing....Your talent for writing is wonderful and you should keep on writing for what comes from your heart could affect the hearts of millions....That poem was awsome...You made me feel like I knew the people you had involved....I loved it.Keep it up!!!

yo ur work is good, i really liked this 1 , because i was in a situation were this guy liked me n i liked him 2 but i never told, him n he thought i was playing wit him, then he died in all of my fellings were captured inside, so i can relate.

this poem sounds like it is deffinatly from the heart. i totally agree with you that you always have to tell someone you love them no matter how you think they will react.

THAT IS A GOOD POEM....AND SUMTHIN LIKE DAT REALLY HAPPEN 2 ME.... I WAITED 2 LONG 2 TELL HIM...

That iz a very good story!

I love this its so great...this explains how I have felt for this one guy for a while and I recently told him how I felt..