Comments : Hang In There

  • 19 years ago

    by becca

    hey this si a great poem i can relate to it xxx luv becca xxx

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hi Ren

    What struck me most about this poem was the line "My Angel always tells me to be myself...But I don't...For I don't know who I am".

    We so often hear people telling us to "just be ourselves" but sometimes, that is the very problem - we ourselves don't know who we are.

    I love this Ren - it's full of sad truths that I certainly can relate to.
    All the best,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you for your kind words, Ben :)

      I appreciate you reading and commenting on my poems, even the old ones that are not so great, haha.

      Take care,
      Ren

  • 7 years ago

    by Shruti

    Lovely, soft, and sad...
    The last few lines really reached the whole of me. You write so well!
    Nice.

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much, Shruti!

  • 7 years ago

    by Lost One

    Well, the tears are flowing...

    • 7 years ago

      by Ren

      <3 thanks for reading, even though this is old and not that great, lol

  • 7 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Then let them flow it!
    It's a good thing to release your emotions